Documentation enhancement

guide/src/class.md

@@ -18,12 +18,13 @@ struct MyClass {
 The above example generates implementations for `PyTypeInfo`, `PyTypeObject`
 and `PyClass` for `MyClass`.
 
-Specifically, the following implementation is generated.
+Specifically, the following implementation is generated:
 
 ```rust
 use pyo3::prelude::*;
 use pyo3::{PyClassShell, PyTypeInfo};
 
+/// Class for demonstration
 struct MyClass {
     num: i32,
     debug: bool,
@@ -38,7 +39,7 @@ impl PyTypeInfo for MyClass {
 
     const NAME: &'static str = "MyClass";
     const MODULE: Option<&'static str> = None;
-    const DESCRIPTION: &'static str = "This is a demo class";
+    const DESCRIPTION: &'static str = "Class for demonstration";
     const FLAGS: usize = 0;
 
     #[inline]
@@ -89,14 +90,14 @@ pyo3::inventory::collect!(MyClassGeneratedPyo3Inventory);
 ## Get Python objects from `pyclass`
 You sometimes need to convert your `pyclass` into a Python object in Rust code (e.g., for testing it).
 
-For getting *GIL-bounded*(i.e., with `'py` lifetime) references of `pyclass`,
+For getting *GIL-bounded* (i.e., with `'py` lifetime) references of `pyclass`,
 you can use `PyClassShell<T>`.
 Or you can use `Py<T>` directly, for *not-GIL-bounded* references.
 
 ### `PyClassShell`
 `PyClassShell` represents the actual layout of `pyclass` on the Python heap.
 
-If you want to instantiate `pyclass` in Python and get the the reference,
+If you want to instantiate `pyclass` in Python and get the reference,
 you can use `PyClassShell::new_ref` or `PyClassShell::new_mut`.
 
 ```rust
@@ -182,21 +183,24 @@ impl MyClass {
 }
 ```
 
-Rules for the `new` method:
+If no method marked with `#[new]` is declared, object instances can only be
+created from Rust, but not from Python.
 
-* If no method marked with `#[new]` is declared, object instances can only be created
-  from Rust, but not from Python.
-* All parameters are from Python.
-* It can return one of these types:
-  - `T`
-  - `PyResult<T>`
-  - `PyClassInitializer<T>`
-  - `PyResult<PyClassInitializer<T>>`
-* If you pyclass declared with `#[pyclass(extends=BaseType)]` and `BaseType`
-is also `#[pyclass]`, you have to return `PyClassInitializer<T>` or
-`PyResult<PyClassInitializer<T>>` with the baseclass initialized. See the
-below Inheritance section for detail.
-* For details on the parameter list, see the `Method arguments` section below.
+For arguments, see the `Method arguments` section below.
+
+### Return type
+
+If your pyclass is declared with baseclass(i.e., you use `#[pyclass(extends=...)])`),
+you must return a `PyClassInitializer` with the base class initialized.
+
+For constructors that may fail, you should wrap the return type in a PyResult as well.
+Consult the table below to determine which type your constructor should return:
+
+
+|                    | **Cannot fail**         | **May fail**                      |
+|--------------------|-------------------------|-----------------------------------|
+| **No inheritance** | `T`                     | `PyResult<T>`                     |
+| **Inheritance**    | `PyClassInitializer<T>` | `PyResult<PyClassInitializer<T>>` |
 
 ## Inheritance
 

src/pyclass.rs

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ pub(crate) unsafe fn default_alloc<T: PyTypeInfo>() -> *mut ffi::PyObject {
     alloc(tp_ptr, 0)
 }
 
-/// A trait that enables custome alloc/dealloc implementations for pyclasses.
+/// A trait that enables custom alloc/dealloc implementations for pyclasses.
 pub trait PyClassAlloc: PyTypeInfo + Sized {
     unsafe fn alloc(_py: Python) -> *mut Self::ConcreteLayout {
         default_alloc::<Self>() as _
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ pub unsafe fn tp_free_fallback(obj: *mut ffi::PyObject) {
 /// If `PyClass` is implemented for `T`, then we can use `T` in the Python world,
 /// via `PyClassShell`.
 ///
-/// `#[pyclass]` attribute automatically implement this trait for your Rust struct,
+/// The `#[pyclass]` attribute automatically implements this trait for your Rust struct,
 /// so you don't have to use this trait directly.
 pub trait PyClass:
     PyTypeInfo<ConcreteLayout = PyClassShell<Self>> + Sized + PyClassAlloc + PyMethodsProtocol
@@ -96,9 +96,10 @@ where
     }
 }
 
-/// `PyClassShell` represents the concrete layout of `PyClass` in the Python heap.
+/// `PyClassShell` represents the concrete layout of `T: PyClass` when it is converted
+/// to a Python class.
 ///
-/// You can use it for testing your `#[pyclass]` correctly works.
+/// You can use it to test your `#[pyclass]` correctly works.
 ///
 /// ```
 /// # use pyo3::prelude::*;
@@ -268,7 +269,7 @@ where
     }
 }
 
-/// A speciall initializer for `PyClassShell<T>`, which enables `super().__init__`
+/// A special initializer for `PyClassShell<T>`, which enables `super().__init__`
 /// in Rust code.
 ///
 /// You have to use it only when your `#[pyclass]` extends another `#[pyclass]`.
@@ -387,9 +388,9 @@ impl<T: PyTypeInfo> PyClassInitializer<T> {
     }
 }
 
-/// Represets that we can convert the type to `PyClassInitializer`.
+/// Represents that we can convert the type to `PyClassInitializer`.
 ///
-/// It is mainly used in our proc-macro code.
+/// This is mainly used in our proc-macro code.
 pub trait IntoInitializer<T: PyClass> {
     fn into_initializer(self) -> PyResult<PyClassInitializer<T>>;
 }
@@ -418,7 +419,7 @@ impl<T: PyClass> IntoInitializer<T> for PyResult<PyClassInitializer<T>> {
     }
 }
 
-/// Register new type in python object system.
+/// Register new type in the python object system.
 #[cfg(not(Py_LIMITED_API))]
 pub fn initialize_type<T>(py: Python, module_name: Option<&str>) -> PyResult<*mut ffi::PyTypeObject>
 where